Farhana, there are some relevant notes but you are rather descriptive, and you do not analyse the meaning // purpose of technical elements such as camera and editing. You are not clear enough on representing the artist, and you are rather vague about ideas you could use for your own music video. VC
I am not sure if you have addressed my above comments, but if so, you haven't addressed them in any detail! Please revisit the case studies and address my comments. Vc
Farhana, there are some relevant notes but you are rather descriptive, and you do not analyse the meaning // purpose of technical elements such as camera and editing. You are not clear enough on representing the artist, and you are rather vague about ideas you could use for your own music video. VC
ReplyDeleteI am not sure if you have addressed my above comments, but if so, you haven't addressed them in any detail! Please revisit the case studies and address my comments. Vc
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